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They stopped outside the pink double doors to check their appearances.

"Kishu-kun, how do I look?" Ichigo said with a cute voice. Kish was standing in

awe. His sun golden eyes glittered with delight as he spoke. "You will always look

good in my eyes." She smiled and they kissed softly. The doors opened and

Pudding stood there. "*gasp* na no da!" she whispered. They didn't seem to

notice. Kishu was stroking Ichigo's ears, but stopped as six pairs of eyes were

haunting them. "Oh... Ugh... don't be suprised. I... Ugh... I mean... We are going

out. Ha! Nya!" She smiled, and her night black tail flew to her side, ribbon in mint

condition. "You're so cute." Kish said. "Since when?" Lettuce gasped. "Kick the

happy couple out." Zakuro said coldly. Shirogane and Mint looked at each other

oddly. Ichigo and the others continued babbling while Mint had a moment. Mint's

ice blue eyes started to water. A lone shining tear curved down her face. "I can't

do this anymore." She whispered to herself. No one seemed to notice. "Ichigo,"

everyone stopped to see a quivering Mint, "I'm happy for you," she had to force

those words out. "And I hope you're happy for me." Her voice started to break

and she forced a smirk on her lips. Everyone looked around, confused, until one

voice spoke. "Shirogane onii-chan and Mint onee-chan are secret lovers NA NO

DA!" Pudding yelled. Everyone looked at her suprised. "How did you know?"

Shirogane and Mint yelled in usion, their jaws dropped. "It all began like this, NA

NO DA! Ah! Eh. Um. I guessed na no da." Either way she looked proud. "I... was

just... my monkey... needs to painted!" She started swaying. "Pudding are you

OK?" Keiichero asked. "Pudding? Who's this Pudding DA NA NO? It's Princess to

you scum!" She looked like she was drunk. Kish and Ichigo actually broke into the

reality of the situation.  Pudding's sweat made a puddle on the floor. Ichigo ran to

Pudding... er... Princess. Pudding's hair fell out of the pony tails. She gave a last

look at everyone before her eyes rolled to the back of her head. She collapsed

and everything was slowed, or so it seemed. Not a heartbeat was heard. Ichigo's

tears dove through the air as she stepped toward Pudding. Was the happy-go-

lucky girl... dead?
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Author's Comments

Yay. Chapter 4! This was a scary chapter for me to write, because I was listening to a story in my head while I was writing, and it sorta came out like this.

I feel bad leaving you guys with a cliffhanger, but you must admit it's pretty exciting.

Mia Ikumi and Reiko Yoshida own TMM
Story (c) Mwah. :]

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nuu! don't die pudding! (what is na no da?)
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She always says that at the end of her sentences in the tmm Japanese version
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oh (doesn't really focus) ha ha

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